All Comments on 'Paying Off Daddy's Debt'

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Magizi87Magizi87over 5 years ago
I love when a non-cpn story meets a gangbang story.

I wished the second part was more detailed. It felt rushed, it ended too abruptly.

The whole 30 on 1 idea, where it was implied that each thug could have several turns deserved several pages worth of content IMO. Maybe it could have been downscaled to 5-10 guys so the whole ordeal was easier to write?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

She didn’t do it to help her dad, so much as she did to save her mom...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I wish i was thereem to lick them both clean

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I like watching football (Falcons), drinking beer, sex, reading some stories on here and of course writing my own! If you have any ideas for a story message them to me and I'll see if that idea interests me as well. New ideas are also welcome!