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Very well written. Keep writing dear.

कर्ज फेडले साडी काढून

मी पण पराग कडून कर्ज घेतले व ते फेडणे अशक्य झाले.

बायकोने त्यास घरी बोलावले व भोजनानंतर परागने तिला खेचले.

दंडाला करून नेले थेट बेडरूमात

रंगला प्रणय दोघांचा

हे तर व्याज होते.

मुद्दल म्हणून परागने ५० वे़ळा तिच्या सोबत संभोग केला.

कर्ज वसुली झाली व बायको तृप्त झाली

radha_gopal:

you are a talented erotica writer.

I gave you a 5.0 (100% or A+), ☆☆☆☆☆!

I will read your other stories at a later date.

Life can be a bitch. On top of that,

it is easier to be a man than a woman.

Shruti is a trooper and a fighter. She realises that a girl's gotta do what a gorl's gotta do.

In my book Shruti is a keeper but the lucky man must offer her true love, respect, and good sex.

Spoiler ALERT!

Spoiler ALERT!

Spoiler ALERT!

Your ending is a cliffhanger.

You could have posted two or three paragraphs, like a vignette or something.

Failing that each of us will use their own imagination.

This is how the story ends:

"Sanjay was now taking off his boxers and his monster cock sprung up like a king cobra.

My body shuddered in fear."

This is a five star story.