All Comments on 'Paying Rent with Her Ass'

Lame!

I appreciate the constructive criticism but I'm glad overall you loved it. Lamé like gold Lamé right? So nice of you and no, sorry I don't suck but you can always use your girlfriend righty. Well you really made my day, man and I think I'm going keep up the good work so you'll have more whacking material.

it wasn't exactly hot, but it was funny as all fucking hell, I laughed my ass off.

Thanks man! I see your point. I am a bit of a humorist, and I'm relatively new at this milieu. I guess I forgot to make it hot. But i'd love to hear what you think of my other stories on here. At least you might get another chuckle.

I began reading and was positive this would be a great wanker story. As it turned out, it was one of the funniest things I've ever read. I give this a 5 for sex but a 10 for laughs. Thanks.

hot scenario - I'd like it a little darker - with her a touch more reluctant (or playing harder to get), but its a good one Keep writing!

Tongue tasting her asshole. Perfect!