All Comments on 'Payment for Tutoring Kathy's Kid'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Take your time

Good story, good plot development, but the last few paragraphs felt rushed.

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

My second read of your stories. My impression remains the same - short and sweet and hurried. My last read - sorry.

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I've been a fan of this site for years and I've decided that it's time for me to share some of my experiences. What I write is based on real experiences. I welcome feedback, engagement and an exchange of ideas and experiences if anyone wants to share directly.

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