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by Macrosmatic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Far too short. Nothing exciting yet. You need some fun in each part of your story.

I'll come back when you'll published 10 or 20 chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good opening for a series, you have her interested. Now for part 2 the negotiation and opening events.

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