All Comments on 'Peaches and Cream Pt. 04'

I am loving this couple...they are a couple, right?

Also pleased Matt was there for her and they are becoming 'real' friends.

Just keeps getting better!

Ready for chapter 4

Can't wait till next chapter

Amazing series please keep it up

When is the next part?

Please don't leave us hanging like this..... I love it.... oh and BTW I grew up in Johnston county, North Carolina . Clayton, its 20 mins from Smithfield. from NC?

...this appears to lack a lot of transition between parts, usually between paragraphs. Readers can follow the action but at some points it feels rough to read. Focus on adding a little more explanation and make sure you finish off the paragraphs to where they flow into the next one.

Love seeing Cat unwind and open up to her sexuality. Doesn't seem too rushed, although because of the above lack of transition at some points, some of the scenes were a little hard to follow. Iron out the transition issue and you have a real winner.