by RobXXX
Great story. I almost had a similar experience when I was your age but chickened out and always regretted it.
Good forward motion. Perfect discription of first time experience. I’m not into restraints. But I liked the set up for the younger mans first time kinks. I coulda appreciated some panties play. Maybe next time. Having said that, your the best writer of my kind of porn that I ever experienced.
Loved the story, the progression and pace. Very exciting and had me hard wishing I could find a sweet 18 yo virgin.
with the exception of a few misplaced or misspelled words, it was one of the most entertaining stories I have ever read on this site. it just smacks of being true. --which I hope was true, and I am not nagging about the wording.
don't give up and write more!
your new Texas fan
This brings back memories of my first time with a man. Don't sweat the grammar stuff. The story more than makes up for it.
Love this story. I'm older,but would like a younger man to show me the ropes.
I love this story so much. I think it have made me cum at least a hundred times over the last couple of years. Wish it was me who met Jean. Still looking for my mature lover
Love the story, stolen love, became perfect. Still waiting for my first.2
Great coming of age piece. Great pace of story. I really felt connected to these two new lovers. The older guy took his time; and sparks flew.
i felt the same way he felt as he watched jean walk out of his dorm as i was reading the final paragraphs
Possibly the most erotic and entertaining story of young/old I have read. Can't wait for the next
This is one of the best coming-of-age stories I've ever read. It expressed what I so dreamed of at that age. My first gay sex was not merely as pleasurable, and it took a few men to teach me to enjoy it and come out to friends. Now in a long term relationship with a man my own age, with whom we occasionally initiate college students in our life style.
I love having rich, older, sophisticated men turn me into their cum-loving little slutboy who will do anything to please them. This has all the elements a slutboy likes, generous man with gray chest hair whose cock is bigger sucking me in the front seat of his Mercedes making me feel like a sexy little whoreboy who should be wearing panties. Let's go shopping for some sexy outfits.
I pick up a young man like yourself, fact is he had just turned 18, he came to the shop to rent a tux; Before he left, he wasnt even going to go to the prom. He was a naive young man, but he did and does love sucking a dick, havent gotten around to the :other; yet, its coming. He and I both like your story, helped us , to cross the line, more please, just like the other, waiting!!!
A great story and nice writing technique. Had me excited! and happy to learn there is a follow-up. Keep writing.
Absolutely brilliant! I too am a bottom ( virgin :( ) and I would have loved to be in your place !
A story with a lovely feel to it, grammar and spelling are things you can always repair but a story no matter how perfect the spelling is nothing without feeling.
Keep up the good work.
I liked this story a lot, especially given it's your first one. But one question: Would an older man like Jean be able to cum so many times in a weekend? Do they have that kind of stamina? Still, you did a great job.
The story was pretty good but def. needs some grammer and word usage changes. Keep it up. I would love to read a reworked version!
100 for the story, a great tale of gay seduction. 00 for editing, really needs serious reworking. Keep writing though, don't let the negative feedback deter you. Use spellcheck/grammercheck and you'll do well.