All Comments on 'Pent-up Frustration'

Absolutely silly. No one can really win everything by just having sex. The epilogue is unnecessary

need more chapters

Very weak ending

clearly a teenager writing his fantasies. me me me me me me is what your story says. doesn't even consider the feelings of other people.

It was pretty good till you added the last four paragraphs. A very lame ending. gave it a 3 it would have been a 4 or 5 without that bit of trash at the end.

What a crock of shit! Try again after you reach puberty.

Did you have a rush of your own story? You basically came too fast at the end.

Unfortunately there is absolutely no merit in the story; rushed and no build up or detail.

Fiction is the product of someone's imagination but there is little or no coherent thought here, almost random appearances of various unnamed participants with no back story and the ending was so bizarre as to be amusing.

Sorry, not to my liking.

you could have made this into a really good story if you had put more thought into it..

seemed rushed and silly

What the fuck was that?