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Submisky35Submisky35over 1 year ago

Very well written. Story well told. I assume...and am hopeful...that there will be a DAY 2, 3, 4, and 5 coming (no pun intended.) Five stars

SirKevinSirKevinover 1 year ago

Good intro, and an admirable knowledge of some of the psych elements of Domination and Submission. Looking forward to more, reach out to the community for a proofreader/editor for your next piece. (Should be 'high waisted', for example) Keep writing!

rebelxcarpenterrebelxcarpenterover 1 year agoAuthor

thanks so much! yes- this is a complete work with 5 parts. Part 2 should be posted any minute!

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