All Comments on 'Perfect'

i loved it so much please write more please

HA! HA! Serves you right! You wanna play? You suffer the hard work after! Proceed without caution and you get a pain in the neck. Thanks for the bloody laughter! A cool ending that's forever.

Your witty charm is captivating, but unlike her I'm wary, keep up the sexy and naive stories! Or any story in particular for you're memorizing!

Caught in a web of deceit that's well woven. You send shivers down my spine and to other nether regions ;)

This comment made by someone still waiting to be taken, with a limited time warranty. Clock's ticking, send out your damn vampire already!

A note of gratitude by lil o'l me :)

Beautiful writing and just what a great short story should be - take us with the flow, lead us on: then hit us between the eyes with the twist in the tail. I'll be looking for more stories from you.

You grabbed my attention and kept it. A really nice twist at the end. Well done.

harder, longer, faster!

:)

Keep at it, I really would like to see more of these characters.

Maharat

It really is a remarkable piece of erotic literature. The initial attraction is intense and relatable. The sexual tension between the characters is built at a very controlled pace, which is very sexy, and its mysterious and dark nature deepens the story, adding a sensual undercurrant on which the story glides. The last sentence leaves you feeling breathless and aching for more, just like a good date. I look forward to reading more from this author, something longer but with the same dextrous manipulation of the reader...