All Comments on 'Perfect Wife, Perfect Maid'

Nice change of pace for you.

Boyd

can do. Now what? This wasn't up to you but you didn't really intend that - did you?

Uneasy from the get go as it isn't what you and few others can do. This was crude and by the numbers wasteful.

Not much for the portfolio or most.

love it

Not your classic Dinsmore read, for sure. I did find myself a bit envious of Sam.

This story is sorta fucked up from reality.

Didn't read it because of your great warning. Thank you for the warning I wish more authors did that.

Respectfully

PT

Just a cute , sexy , short story ... and that's just why I came here . Did I want philosophy ??? Nope !!! This is well written , has a nice hidden ending , and everyone's happy and wet. Perfection !!! Bob R.

I loved the story. A little crude in places, but tolerable. The only thing I would improve upon would be descriptions. Be a little more descriptive of what they are wearing, and it would be better.

The warning preface was accurate, but... timing, wording... it's nice to see a guy who can write a piece of "throwaway trash" who can still *write*. I'll be reading your other stuff...

Lucky bastard...

Just mindless prattle and not even good as a stroke story.

Absolutely worthless and pathetic !!

I have a better name for them. Perfect assholes.

HA

Perfect eunuch. Anyone who spends as much time as betrayed reading and commenting here has never been laid - total fucking eunuch.

but to each his own, lol

I do have issue with the cheating wife - doing it with Donna is not an exception to the rule it breaks it.

Beyond that (my hang up mot yours) it was a fun read -

you get 5* for the disclaimer. thank you

Made for a fucked up story. I think Sam listens, packs his things and leaves. What a couple of liars he's been fucking. And they're Bi to boot. Who the hell else are they fucking would have been his question. Time to go. Horrible story about horrible people.

1 star

Piss off with this nasty garbage.