All Comments on 'Perfection Ch. 03'

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I LIKE A GOOD STORY THAT'S A SLOW BURNER. JUST WISH YOU WROTE MORE THAN 1 OR 2 PAGES MORE PER CHAPTER. SO FAR SO GOOD.

Yes, we like. Cannot wait 4 more !!!!

I'm a little bit disappointed that we haven't gotten more of the back story about these two characters. 😕 You had a fantastic opportunity to explore the possibilities of everything from 5th grade to present day.

And you already knew that you effed up by getting a sex scene written too damn soon since you said so yourself. 4/5 for this installment.