All Comments on 'Performance Blank'

Wow, don't even know where to start, but this writing is so disjointed. The first six paragraphs are so confusing with no direction at all, not even sure what they bring to this rambling effort. The whole writing if you could call that is like someone is on drugs and is hallucinating and nothing is erotic about this at all. Based on the little one could understand, no comedy club would allow what you are proposing to take place. You tend to ramble with no direction at all. You jump all over the place and confuse the heck out of the reader, there is no story here. The claimed debauchery by the subject could not take place in the setting you present. No point in continuing this path of writing as it is a disaster.