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OleguyOleguyabout 10 years ago
Now that was imagination.

Why does your story not deserve a pink 'H' with a score of 4.71 plus my tardy adding of 5*. I did like that.

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Been busy lately, but will try to post some new ones. Thanks again for your constructive comments! ------------------------------------ I've written a fair bit of non-fiction before, but these are my first tries at fiction. So far, I'm having a blast with it! Thanks t...