by Quixerotic1
maybe write a sequel from luthor's point of view. Knowing what's coming the dread and then wanting it
Somehow felt drawn out and short-shrifted. You spend more time explaining how greek life works than you do explaining what the hell is going on at this particular frat. It made for a pretty frustrating read actually.
I also found it very strange how accepting everyone seems to be of this. Granted, there is "magic" involved, but still. Did the other pledges with pink coins know what was going to happen or just Luther? If so, why on earth would they agree to this? If not, how is there not a riot the next morning? How has any of this remained a secret? These are the kind of questions I would have really liked to seen answered.
Also feel like this belongs more in sci-fi than trans, but that's not such a big deal.
Any unmentioned exposition is explained... except what university he is at, damn did I choose the wrong one!
magic bullshit aside, NOBODY WOULD WATCH THEIR FRIEND TRANSFORM INTO A GIRL AND THEN FUCK THEM IMMEDIATELY! HE SHOULD HAVE RUN SCREAMING FROM THE ROOM! WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS GODAWFUL BULLSHIT? CANT ANYBODY WRITE A DECENT FUCKING STORY ANYMORE?
I really enjoyed your tale of fraternities and sororities with a complexing fascination. Bottom line, it was very compelling and I loved it. BTW where do I get a neck tattoo like that :) ;)
No short term plans. Long term, the Zeta fraternity is something I'd like to revisit. It'd be a few years on from this story. Lucy and Nick would be seniors, ready to shepherd in a new crop of pledges. Nick spends his time teaching pledges while Lucy's responsibilities are educating the newly changed on how to be women. During this they have to wrangle their own relationship as they face life after college.
Every time I read this it still is hot at fuck. You really penned a masterpiece.
Very enjoyable story. The 'reveal' was ddeliciously delayed. I'm British, and we don't have all this fraternity nonsense, so all the details actually helped my understanding.
Every time I read this, it give me the same feelings s the first time. You have created a master In the story. I a so envious every single time I come across this.
Good story and a different slant on the gender swap genre, I’d like to see it from Luther’s pov as well, differences between the anticipation and the reality as well as how he/she enjoys it from the other side of the table so to speak.
Please think about writing the follow up piece, it’d definitely be well received from me.
5⭐️ cheers, Ppfzz.