All Comments on 'Permission Ch. 08'

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EgoTrixiEgoTrixiover 10 years ago
He doesn´t understand the game...

...she is not his slut - she is everbodys´slut. He is just the poor dumb wimp that pays for everything.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Big Risk

Grabbing someone from behind, unexpected and in the dark, carries a fair amount of risk! To both the grabbee AND the grabber.

I think EgoTrixi knows the game! Good comment!

LibertinemanLibertinemanover 10 years ago
Very enjoyable.

At times, left empty due to cliff hanger endings of chapters. Other times hot as can be.

Will be looking for more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good job!

I liked that Mark took what is his! *****

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
pathetic

really pathetic.

deadonedeadoneover 10 years ago
Thank you EgoTrixi

You stated it perfectly.

He is nothing but the dummy paying for everybody else's fun.

If he gets some fine if not fine. She will always get lots.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
8 CHAPTERS OF VOMIT

UNO ESTRELLA

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
6 months later.

She finds out she is pregnant, no clue who the father is, Mark left a month before when he found out she gave him a serious S.T.D. Stupid story about fucked up people. My guess is the writer is even more fucked up, yuck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very good.

I am normally a strong advocate of BTB but this story was great.

well done.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Home

The whore finally comes home to her.loving cuck. I think I'm the only.One to read this and I'm not proud.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
NEVER READ ALL THE CRAP.............................................

In between 1 and 8. Thank goodness they're only 1 page long.please put this crap in its own category.

WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

I kept hoping, in vain, that hubby would wake up to himself and kick the slut to the curb where she deserved to be. No such luck.

What a disappointing tale about a slut and a cuck

Yes, that’s what it ended up being a cuck tale

Scores 1/5

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Really well-told story. But now what happens to them?

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