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WhiteWave48WhiteWave48almost 17 years ago
Playful

This story is so rich in character - the country and its culture, the playful sister-in-law, the rules of the house. As well as that, so much of the sex is handled in a light-hearted and realistic way, so it's quite amusing as well as interesting for the reader.

duddle146duddle146almost 17 years ago
Wonderful!

Such a lovely story. You write very well, and I found the little plot very enjoyable. We should all have a sister-in-law like that. You might think of taking this further with perhaps another episode. I can't believe it wouldn't be welcomed by thoughtful readers here on Literotica.

Best of luck in your future writing.

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