All Comments on 'Perry Ch. 01'

Two ways to go. Symbiotic relationship or perry controls everything? Either way this could be a very interesting story. You could even have a bit of a battle of wills to see who is going to be the lead dog in this new adventure. So Perry gets his bio mass from sexual fluids. what does he give back to Ed besides great sex? 5 stars for a great idea and very well written intro. A few typos but those are to be expected.

Cool Story!

I made typos? Agh, where?