All Comments on 'Personal Assistant'

by kickinasphault

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Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Next chapter please. I like the story a lot. AAAA+++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You've turned what could be very average into something special. I look forward to reading how Mary and D's relationship continues.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Didn't like it. It could have been better if it were a longer story. The words ' I love you ' seem too abrupt

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good start. I hope there is more to come…or cum.

SisterJezabelSisterJezabelover 2 years ago

A 5'5" supermodel? Interesting...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story but all a bit perfect, could really do with a plot twist now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Many PA's dream come true. And they often do.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Well this is the first story here on Lit that I have seen from this author and really liked it. I do believe this is a story that deserves more chapters and a chance to become a more in depth love story. Author seems to have a talent and I for one would enjoy reading more of this story. Well done 5 stars

juanviejojuanviejoabout 1 year ago

What's not to like? CINCO ESTRELLAS!

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

I liked the premise of the story but you rushed it too much. Next time start with him getting to know her then sex then love. It's all jumbled up in on way to short story.

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