All Comments on 'Personal Assistant'

That was really good. Could you write some more about Blaine and James please

Total plot twist at the end!! I loved it. Could you write more about Blaine and James in the future?

My wish is to see this talented writer follow up this grand five star first story with many, many more.

sweet little quickie there which is quite hot an explosive. loved it.

I too enjoyed the twist at the end. I enjoy a little humor now and then.

crap

That was wonderful! Please write more!

that was really good.

Thoroughly enjoyed it

Wasn't expecting that. It was good :) it might not sound important but it really is, your spelling and grammar were nigh flawless. It can totally ruin a good story when a reader keeps tripping over mistakes. Spoils the whole flow. Very good for a first time. Keep going :)

Hot and light hearted- what's not to love?

Well done. Look forward to more.

Superbly erotic; my cock throbbed

Best.Plot twist.EVER

I liked the description of the bodies and the action, but it happened far too early into the story, in my opinion.