All Comments on 'Perspective: Hers'

A bit long, but you did build up nicely to the sex and I enjoyed the story. Thank you.

I like the perspective direction. Want to read his perspective, also you give wonderful detail. Sex was hot, made me hot... and wet... thank you

I have read both perspectives and like Hers way better than His. Forgive me. I have an affinity for female piano players. Being a piano player myself, I did not relate much to Geoff other than his treatment of Maxine. His character might have drawn me in if he was a musician also.

Your description of Max's thoughts is wonderful! I felt every feeling she had because I have experienced them all. Thank you for this series. I enjoyed both of them.

Read this perspective last and, while both views are sensitive and share similar eagerness, one part would have benefited with extra, different thoughts. The dialogue, obviously, is repeated and that means one perspective should contain something new, a fresh view or unexpected reaction. Still, overall, it's an entertaining two-piece and bravo for attempting a tricky style.

This was pretty thought out. Your build up went all the way into the foreplay and actually lingered there a while. It makes for a satisfying reward system when you get to the sex. Pity he doesn't finish but I guess it wasn't really about him. I'll check out the other pov now.