All Comments on 'Perspectives the Sequel Ch. 04'

Yawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwn...Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Will you wake me up after you stop writing this dialogoue or monologoue or whatever fuck this is ? Its definately not porn writing by any stretch of imagination. Please stop this torture :)

The story reads like a real life chronicle. Good job. Thanks

This sounds like the guilt confessions of a middle aged ordinary woman. Please decide if Cat wants her brains fucked out or not ? Helppppp ...I have lost this meandering monologue of a plot :)

There's way too much dialogue and not enough fucking, after all, this is supposed to be a (written) porn site isn't it?

To the various anon comments earlier, I have a novel suggestion for you......if you dont like it, don't read it!!!!! I for one enjoy your writing a lot. I find it very erotic and can't wait to read more!

If I don't read it how will I know if I like it or not? duh