All Comments on 'Persuasion'

I, however, found this a most enjoyable tale! Thank you for bringing it to us and please bring us many more such stories! Well done - five stars.

This story calls out for a second chapter. It is very well written and very erotic, nice build-up to the story.

Lots of nice triggers in this one for me... Hope there is a chapter 2 coming?

I wanted to be the babe on the bed. The "torture" was clever and new to me.

A nice story that deserves a second chapter

I found the story amazing I rated ut 5 stars. This definitely deserves a second chapter. Definitely.

You have to let us know if she gives in

5* One of my favourite stories on this site, and possibly my favourite story of yours after currently having read the majority, a truly great story from a great writer, please don't stop writing!

Sorry, I don't mind a little rough play between consenting adults, but this crossed the line for me. Persuasion is one thing; torture followed by inevitable submission is another. And the name we have given that other thing is 'rape'.

Wonderful storytelling, well written, this was a compelling story. I'd love to read the next chapter, which I suggest you submit in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category, as this one should have been.

Whether you continue this story or not, please keep writing. You displayed real talent and skill in this story. Even if you don't write for Lit, keep writing.

Powerful stuff, a skillfully written breaking of a young woman into lesbianism. Agree with the others though - this is hard non-consent.

This needed something, sexy but I had trouble keeping track and following.

Hi all,

Thanks for the comments and feedback, and I agree, I misclassified this story. It actually wasn't intended to be nonconsent but more of a bet/challenge, and then I got sidetracked by the main character and didn't give enough attention to the woman on the bed. Oh, well. Hopefully she escaped.

Hmm. A female serial rapist. That's different. Not to my taste, but it is different.

I'd like to lick you, when I confirm your a woman. Your very Manish, as in I'm sure you'll love it, just let me show you