All Comments on 'Pervert Ch. 01'

Damn that was good. More please.

there's initial resistance, as in this excellent story, in the minds of a mother and son to their taboo coupling. Then this resistance is eroded, as the boy is overcome by a natural lust for the cunt he came out of, and mom is engulfed by the passion most all mothers feel down deep for what her baby boy's got jumping around in his pants. Can't wait see where this story's going.

the best part of incest stories is the long slow build up that brings the characters to cross that uncrossable line, and this story was all that.

I gave it 5* for effort, but you do need to proof read a little closer. some dropped words and mixed he/she references distracted from an overall nice piece.

looking forward to Chap 2

I love the build up and cannot wait for chapter 2

Not really my cup of Tea with-out a 3 page build-up on who is going to shave who first and then who is going to second.! Maybe I missed something along the way on this one as I did blink there for a second.^ Try again but with some build-up next time.!**

Have I not read this before?

Thought it was good. Hope there's more the cum.

Fantastic, I started getting hard from the first and was throbbing by the end of chapter one. I can hardly wait for dads next business trip, I know the will consummate on dads next trip. Great job, on listen to the complainers they have no imagination only wam bam thank you mam for them.

Hurry up with more!!

Totally unrealistic and unimaginative. I typically like all sorts of mother/son stories but this one is just lame. 3 pages of buildup for what....for the son to shave his mother?

Good so far can't wait for the next installment.

I usually don't like stories with no pay off but your way of doing it made it hotter. Btw shaving is one of my fetishes and I loved it. I so want to shave my sister and make her cum as I am doing it.

Nice build up, original idea. Nicely paced. Can't wait for part 2.

It's not bad, kind of dumb in spots, but has potential to be better. This type of stuff can get boring real fast if it drags too much.

I hope this continues! Thank you!

Some moms have used porn discoveries to their advantage. They are usually more subtle in their games, teasing son and know he will jo for them.

but WTF was screaming to myself?

Simply amazing is there another chapter? Did they end up having sex?