All Comments on 'Pet Store'

Is the lack of capital letters supposed to be creative? Woke? New wave? Perhaps just an indication the author spilled coffee on the keyboard and ruined the Shift key.

Harsh, @jleetechie. I didn't even notice it after the first or second paragraph as I was so wrapped up in putting myself in her place.

A bit strange, I admit. Oddly, the most common grammar error, not placing the period inside the closing quote, is done correctly. I actually had a hard time reading this due to the capitalization issue.

I love this fantasy

Fuck, this was amazing. This is the first time i have climaxed while reading a story. I wasnt even horny when i started. Great work

taking initiative finding and explaining the bracelet made this special for me. sweetness always finds its path; lucky guy.

I enjoyed this a lot, thank you.