All Comments on 'Pet Teacher (Conclusion)'

by mmumbles

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Stumbled

I had hoped that the story line would pick up as it went along but it stumbled as it tried to cover all the author's fantasies in a few paragraphs.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nothing there

No story unless you count what amounts to virtual rape a story. Mindless wtiting at its worst

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