All Comments on 'Peter's Lucky Night'

OK premise.

But sex starts too fast. And progresses to fast.

Needs lots more slow, step-by-step foreplay. Needs learning about each other. Needs some reluctance, and story about how it was overcome.

Three stars.

Well done, made my cock rock hard!

Loved it. Nice pace. Great storytelling. My only criticism is that the length of his dick and her bra cup size were irrelevant to the story and stood out as such. Trust your readers to use their imaginations. It's much more erotic.