All Comments on 'Petra's Tale Pt. 03'

by Shaima32

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MaonaighMaonaighalmost 5 years ago
Erosion

A succinct and telling look at the slow erosion of a marriage and how religious attitudes (the misogynistic homophobes) can inhibit people's natural inclinations. You are very good at this kind of story Shaima---long may you reign.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 5 years ago
not bad

except for the blindfold (not into that myself) it was a good short series

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 5 years ago
not bad

except for the blindfold ( not into that) it was a good short series

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
Just writing about is exorcism

What do we expect from us and others is the main focus over our being ..... So we can become a beloved soul ..... If i have an outlook and take in my surroundings its hard to find truly happy couples ..... Its all in all fighting ..... Im so tired of this scenario, because never seen a winner in such like in a war no winner at all ..... And each war is starting in a family as the smallest part to be happen ..... Pitty for this society and no i wasnt a better one just discovered some light .... Thank you for your art of writing for dipping toes in uncharted water ..... Namaste

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