All Comments on 'Phantom Lover'

Your style is pretty telegraphic like a military communication or an engineering document. Hence the continuing need to elaborate and add color. Especially background. How did they get into swinging?

All three of your stories (so far) would make a nice chapter one for a series. Keep writing! You seem to have some fresh ideas and interesting twists.

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Thought something strange happening with bed switch.

I guess your screw up.

No

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Semmiről nem szólt ,semmi érdemleges ,valójában egy átverés,mert nem is a szerető feleség kategóriába tartozott...!Nagyon kevés fantázia kellett hozzá! Sajnos nincs mínusz jel ,így csak 1 csillagot tudtam adni...!

Boring.

Sad people !

Different take on the swinging scene. I liked the imaginative idea and how the story was written but feel if it was only the one single encounter then the participants would be feeling a bit disappointed. It's not my scene so I'm totally guessing on that. BardnotBard