All Comments on 'Phantom Pleasure'

Stapler in vagina won't make any woman cum. I hope men don't think that by simply shoving random objects inside is pleasurable. If someone shoved a stapler up your anus, you'd scream bloody murder.

Lol I'm glad someone else mentioned that! I was very turned on until the stapler part. Wtf?

OMG, right? I thought the stapler was a bit over done. Perhaps a pen, finger, or something small but an entire stapler ? 😂😂 wtf Peter?

This story is long ago written, however, that’s still not an excuse for how this was worded. Despite the authors name, it is very apparent that this mindset came from a very gruff masculine being with a deeply rooted rape fantasy.

And what in the actual fuck is going on with the stapler?! Like really....

I was so annoyed by the halfway point, that I didn’t even finish reading. Ghost erotica is a very small niche, and I hope it isn’t littered with rapey ghostly beings. Like come on Peter...

The other logical issue is the ghost cum. She can’t see him, hear him, lest the cold breath and physical assault so in what logic can a dead spiritual being produce ghostly fluids? A good twist would’ve been him causing things to rattle open or slam shut during climax.

I hope to see more from this author mostly because I hope to see an increase in both artistry and creativity in their writings.

Good luck! 👍🏻

It's a story very entertaining.