All Comments on 'Pharaoh’s Curse Pt. 08'

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far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984about 1 year ago

Another great installment. Really looking forward to more. Even though I'm left thinking it was short it was a good stopping point. I'm not usually a fan of cliffhangers when you could end up waiting for months but the way you engaged it ment that yes your wondering what's going to happen next, it also let you know that what ever it is will make a great next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Truly an amazing storyteller. Not just this but many other stories. I skip over the sex sections just to get more story.

Grouch6977Grouch6977about 1 year ago

Well hell, I often wonder just how far into the story this author goes (including all of the small details) before he starts putting it into words. Another great chapter to a great story. This NU thing seems interesting. As a history nut, while reading this story line, one day a few months ago in an antique store, I ran across two books on Egyptology. They were laying out in the middle of a table, as if they knew I was coming. Yes, I bought them and once my home renovation projects are completed, I'll be reading up on Egyptology. Keep it up. Grouch6977

Jessica1986Jessica1986about 1 year ago

Wow, I love it. Keep writing it. I can’t wait for the next one.

RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

Damn I love this Story and how you incorporated Ira and his world into the story. Patiently awaiting Part 09. Thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 1 year ago

shit is gonna happen now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

your stories are the best i have read on here and would like for you too submit them to an anime or cgi company for film versions i think they would be great as series or movies. just my opinion.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Really good, thanks. 5/5

Destro97Destro97about 1 year ago

Loved it and a perfect ending to leave you wanting more another five star chapter can’t wait for the next part

Cutty4637Cutty4637about 1 year ago

Please, please don't make us wait.

buddah222buddah222about 1 year ago

Absolutely brilliant thank you very much for another wonderful chapter realising you can’t just turn them out at a mile a minute, but hopefully we don’t have to wait long for the next thrilling instalment love this and your other works as well, like porn star family👍👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

mharrisonmharrisonabout 1 year ago

Amazing stuff.... !|!|

Really loving this story.

One very very minor complaint - noticed a small number of spelling / typo errors creeping in. Regardless of that it's still an amazingly well written story.

Many thanks for sharing all of your hard work - really appreciate it!!

Slave19941994Slave19941994about 1 year ago

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oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 year ago

Really enjoying this story and the tyeins with others!

randysbrandysbabout 1 year ago

A fantastic story on Egypt. Love the way you weave the story and the reader into the story. Can't wait to read the next few chapters. Hopefully there should be another 6-8 chapters more :)

Roland58Roland58about 1 year ago

I really love this story keep it up

DaddydonthurtmeDaddydonthurtmeabout 1 year ago

Fantastic!!! loved it

jafo81jafo81about 1 year ago

Like you story can you get more soon

bigpaul2022bigpaul2022about 1 year ago

Excellent story!!

Hope you will have more very soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I am really loving that 3 stories are intertwining. It just keeps getting better and better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Brilliant. Great to see all the main characters coming together. I can't wait to see the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So happy your back soul !!! I love all of your stories that I have read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The absolute best of many really good stories from a gifted author... More please

Mark12370Mark12370about 1 year ago

I love this story just like the other one, please write more soon thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Brilliant story looking forward to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

GRRRReat story keep it going, less see what that mind of yours can conjure up next. LOL

bigdaddy880bigdaddy880about 1 year ago

Great story series. As I read your story I can see it I my mind. You are a great writer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Cannot wait for the next part. Love this story soooooo much

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Ok, wow! That was so much better than anything Hollywood has ever produced. I swear if you toned down the sex enough to create a series for HBO, it would be more popular than Game of Thrones. I sincerely thank you for the privilege of reading such a wonderful and riveting story. Please, please hurry and publish the next segment. I anxiously await its release.

GRYFANxGRYFANxabout 1 year ago

Such an amazing story! I have loved every part of it so far and look forward to reading more when you have submitted!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I'm loving this story i love an intilectual myth based story with just the right spicy enhancments. Can wait for the next installment.

Mark12370Mark1237012 months ago

Please , more of this story !!!!

LynchjimLynchjim12 months ago

Need to hurry up with chapter 9 I’m getting withdrawal symptoms now I need my drug of choice please asap mr soul71.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

iv'e fallen in love with this series to the point ive tried to find ones like it. Keep up the good work i look forward to reading the next chapters of this work

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Third time reading this getting desperate for more.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Brilliant story hope to see more soon.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I am hooked. I hope you are continuing this story a love it!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is superbly written,I can not wait to the next chapter,very well done

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great read thus far. Please don’t leave us hanging!

Mark12370Mark1237010 months ago

Please write more about this story it is great.

Thank you for the great read!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A great story. I've lost count of the times I keep checking for the next chapter. Hopefully all is well with the author.

daves_not_heredaves_not_here9 months ago

OMG! Please tell us that you're planning to continue this series!

Series Info:

The author is still actively writing this series.

5 stars for every part so far!

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Brilliant as always. Hoping to see more of this story very soon.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Please more, I keep checking for the next chapter more more more

LADYHONEY5LADYHONEY59 months ago

MORE PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY.....

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Brilliant. I keep coming back to this story hoping for more chapters. A rare story to be so addictive.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

When are the next chapters being released? excellent series definitely need more. Brilliant well done.

RichardbeardRichardbeard7 months ago

Back again to read this series, along with Pornstar Family and Family Secrets. I honestly love it and can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Brilliant story. I keep rereading this, getting desperate for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

BEST i HAVE EVER READ ON THIS SITE

ParapeteParapete7 months ago

I’m looking forward to seeing the next chapter of your journey through Egypt

Well done

Peter

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Great story waiting for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Omg I have so much I want to say about this story. I absolutely love it. I'm glad to see Andrew finally getting some balls, he's going to need them. And I'm glad to see him venturing away from the women who think they need to be on his arms while he's got to do what needs to be done. Especially his mother, I'm sorry but that woman just rubs me the wrong way. I want more of this story please.

Ezperame78Ezperame785 months ago

I truly hope you continue this story. I am really into it.

TrickyDickCaliTrickyDickCali5 months ago

Please keep going! These have been fantastic, thank you for the hard work, research and imagination!!

Bobby_3111Bobby_31115 months ago

Can't wait to read the next chapter, nice work.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Not sure how many times I've read these three stories. Getting desperate for the next chapter of this one it's the best of all your stories.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago
Love it

Please bring to a close

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A really fantastic ride, please get back to it. This, with some more editing, is best seller material. Great story, if you think the sex detracts from the literary brilliance, which I disagree it does, then edit it out and publish this, it will definitely sell as it is...finish it please.

JvitoJvito2 months ago

Fantastic story! Great reading, looking forward to the next chapter

Ravey19Ravey192 months ago

A brilliant story. I hope you can find the time and any inspiration needed to take this ford. An oustanding 5 ⛤

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

One of my favorite stories series. Hope you will be able to write more.

409511381409511381about 2 months ago

Please continue to finish it. I love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Best of your stories. Still hoping for more of this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A superb story that I keep coming back to. Please don't leave it here it's far too good not to continue.

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Incredible story with so much imagination mixed in with a great understanding of history. The author's stories are great but this one takes it to another level!

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

Please tell me you will continue this story soon. I am amazed at the depth of your research in writing this story. There is so much more to this story!

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