by soul71
Another great installment. Really looking forward to more. Even though I'm left thinking it was short it was a good stopping point. I'm not usually a fan of cliffhangers when you could end up waiting for months but the way you engaged it ment that yes your wondering what's going to happen next, it also let you know that what ever it is will make a great next instalment.
Truly an amazing storyteller. Not just this but many other stories. I skip over the sex sections just to get more story.
Well hell, I often wonder just how far into the story this author goes (including all of the small details) before he starts putting it into words. Another great chapter to a great story. This NU thing seems interesting. As a history nut, while reading this story line, one day a few months ago in an antique store, I ran across two books on Egyptology. They were laying out in the middle of a table, as if they knew I was coming. Yes, I bought them and once my home renovation projects are completed, I'll be reading up on Egyptology. Keep it up. Grouch6977
Damn I love this Story and how you incorporated Ira and his world into the story. Patiently awaiting Part 09. Thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!
your stories are the best i have read on here and would like for you too submit them to an anime or cgi company for film versions i think they would be great as series or movies. just my opinion.
Loved it and a perfect ending to leave you wanting more another five star chapter can’t wait for the next part
Absolutely brilliant thank you very much for another wonderful chapter realising you can’t just turn them out at a mile a minute, but hopefully we don’t have to wait long for the next thrilling instalment love this and your other works as well, like porn star family👍👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Amazing stuff.... !|!|
Really loving this story.
One very very minor complaint - noticed a small number of spelling / typo errors creeping in. Regardless of that it's still an amazingly well written story.
Many thanks for sharing all of your hard work - really appreciate it!!
You couldn't write a porn story about Mortal kombat! Porn family incest Johnny Cage and Sonya Blade and Cassie Cage naked porn incest and only three characters and others are not needed, only Johnny Cage and Sonya Blade and Cassie Cage!
A fantastic story on Egypt. Love the way you weave the story and the reader into the story. Can't wait to read the next few chapters. Hopefully there should be another 6-8 chapters more :)
I am really loving that 3 stories are intertwining. It just keeps getting better and better.
Brilliant. Great to see all the main characters coming together. I can't wait to see the next chapters.
The absolute best of many really good stories from a gifted author... More please
I love this story just like the other one, please write more soon thank you
GRRRReat story keep it going, less see what that mind of yours can conjure up next. LOL
Great story series. As I read your story I can see it I my mind. You are a great writer.
Ok, wow! That was so much better than anything Hollywood has ever produced. I swear if you toned down the sex enough to create a series for HBO, it would be more popular than Game of Thrones. I sincerely thank you for the privilege of reading such a wonderful and riveting story. Please, please hurry and publish the next segment. I anxiously await its release.
Such an amazing story! I have loved every part of it so far and look forward to reading more when you have submitted!
I'm loving this story i love an intilectual myth based story with just the right spicy enhancments. Can wait for the next installment.
Need to hurry up with chapter 9 I’m getting withdrawal symptoms now I need my drug of choice please asap mr soul71.
iv'e fallen in love with this series to the point ive tried to find ones like it. Keep up the good work i look forward to reading the next chapters of this work
Please write more about this story it is great.
Thank you for the great read!!!!
A great story. I've lost count of the times I keep checking for the next chapter. Hopefully all is well with the author.
OMG! Please tell us that you're planning to continue this series!
Series Info:
The author is still actively writing this series.
5 stars for every part so far!
Thanks
Brilliant. I keep coming back to this story hoping for more chapters. A rare story to be so addictive.
When are the next chapters being released? excellent series definitely need more. Brilliant well done.
Back again to read this series, along with Pornstar Family and Family Secrets. I honestly love it and can't wait for more!
Brilliant story. I keep rereading this, getting desperate for the next chapter.
I’m looking forward to seeing the next chapter of your journey through Egypt
Well done
Peter
Omg I have so much I want to say about this story. I absolutely love it. I'm glad to see Andrew finally getting some balls, he's going to need them. And I'm glad to see him venturing away from the women who think they need to be on his arms while he's got to do what needs to be done. Especially his mother, I'm sorry but that woman just rubs me the wrong way. I want more of this story please.
Please keep going! These have been fantastic, thank you for the hard work, research and imagination!!
Not sure how many times I've read these three stories. Getting desperate for the next chapter of this one it's the best of all your stories.
A really fantastic ride, please get back to it. This, with some more editing, is best seller material. Great story, if you think the sex detracts from the literary brilliance, which I disagree it does, then edit it out and publish this, it will definitely sell as it is...finish it please.
A brilliant story. I hope you can find the time and any inspiration needed to take this ford. An oustanding 5 ⛤
A superb story that I keep coming back to. Please don't leave it here it's far too good not to continue.
Incredible story with so much imagination mixed in with a great understanding of history. The author's stories are great but this one takes it to another level!
Please tell me you will continue this story soon. I am amazed at the depth of your research in writing this story. There is so much more to this story!