All Comments on 'Phil's Return'

Terrible.

While this was flawed in many ways and left more questions than answers, there is something to the style of writing that shows an interesting flair. I wouldn't give this story much of a grade, but wouldn't bet against the author being capable of a lot more.

A vignette in medias res.

Holds interest, but not enough to score

Might have been a decent read if the formatting wasn't so bad. I stopped at the end of Page 1.

gave it a score of 1 because of that

Jesus, this is written incredibly bad!