All Comments on 'Photo Session Ch. 01'

oh that was wonderful Sally x x x

Loved reading this x

Nice idea. Hopeless writing and comical grammar. Heard of quotation marks?

Great story, thanks for sharing.

Could use some punctuation (lots of sentences missing commas, "tit's" instead of "tits" etc.) and Grant's name came kind of out of left field.

But those are small inconveniences that are easily corrected with a proof-reader.

Whores like them pitchers.

nasty whore

bit of a type--hand in her panties after being fucked,,she didnt have panties on then unless i am mistaken

So if she’s pregnant, is he going to pay child support for 18 years?