All Comments on 'Photographer Ch. 02'

I "Can't stop this feeling", another song title to describe the way this story is growing. I can't wait for the next installment. NYC will never be the same after Greg and Annie get what they are going after.

Only one critisism: Too many incomplete sentences(words missing).

Fine job so far except the occasional spelling errors etc.

I would suggest a proof reader for help. But an excellent story line and I am looking forward to many more chapters.

spelling smelling who cares is the content good does it flow?yes