All Comments on 'Photography 304'

exept she was kind of a bitch.

but really nice work

Damn... maybe I should take photography next semester... Great work *kisses*

Absolutely perfect...

This is the most well-written story I have ever seen on Literotica. You employ images and metaphors brilliantly and make it seem so natural. The altering perspective also flowed nicely, and you managed generally to resist the temptation of accelerating the tempo as the situation heated up... The best line was the one about her scent, "Soft, not quite floral; the scent of clean skin and makeup.". What an imaginative use of "floral"!

You should move on to bigger and better things than erotic fiction though :) Good luck