by ShelbyDawn57
Some bad tenses, misspellings, etc., but a logical, well written story. 4*
Great story. Imagine how happy this technology would make a lot of frustrated people!
Amazingly well written, great storyline!
Different from your other works, but I loved the change, hope you have many more in you.
The story was very good, though the end felt a bit rushed. I agree with others, this would be wonderful technology for anyone who wanted it.
I think you'd get more reads, long-term, if you added tags to it.
I so loved this story. I found myself wanting to be Nici. The sensations of pleasure from her Simon feminizing sounds amazing. Her hair becoming more feminine while her ni
Oh my god, that was so crazy... I love it, Thanks Shelby for a wonderful story... Once all the throwing up is taken care of, the FDA will definitely approve it, Ha...
A wonderful story!!! I loved every detail of it. The sex, the transitioning, the outfits. Everything!!!! You are an excellent writer. Thank you.
Your stories have always been wonderful but this one is brilliant on so many levels. I enjoyed every aspect aside from the fact that I cannot get past the fact that even though it wasn’t mentioned and at times it still seemed to be hinted at, Nick got played. How he didn’t have that thought eating away at him and especially after his musings of why they did t give him the male enhancement version but instead went full bore towards feminizing him and without his consent on top of it all. While he appears to be comfortable and even happy with his/her outcome, Nicki appears to be either a pushover or not that bright when it comes to personal matters. It could give things an interesting direction if you decide to make a continuation or a part 2 or something but it’s just a thought and even though it would be a great direction to go, I think it is mainly due to me wondering what the truth is and at least getting some answers to some of what I think are glaringly obvious coincidences although I don’t believe in coincidences so it would be good to get a few answers since Nicki did ask some questions that got what sounded like preplanned responses. An incredible piece of work from an incredibly talented author. Please keep up the impressive stories. Thanks for all of it.
Yes, you did it again. Love the progression of the story and I can visualize the events. That has an awesome sensual result.
To say I love your work would be a gross understatement! You have done it again. I love this story. Keep them coming.
For Anonymous and any others that were wondering if Nick got played. No.
As I mentioned in my pre-story comment, this began as a forced feminization story but I quickly changed my mind deciding rather that Nick and Jenn loved each other completely and every thing that happened just brought them closer. Nick does enjoy surrendering control on weekends to give him a break of the stresses of his work life, kind of like why some friends of mine enjoy cruises, it's nice to not have to worry about anything for a while, but he is not a true submissive and he trusts Jenn implicitly.
When Jenn introduced the Phase I products, her intent was to enhance Nick's enjoyment of their intimacy. Same reason she invited Terry to join them in the first threesome. Remember, the Phase I products are purely cosmetic. Jenn knew Nick was tactile and wanted to enhance what and how he felt. The jump to the more advanced products was an accident and never something Jenn intended, although once it happened, she found oh so many ways for both of them to enjoy all of it. :).
I would love to read a full length novel version of this. Beautiful work. 10/10 can recommend. Also, when that tech becomes reality, let me know?
You have such talent and imagination and i would hazzard a guess, a lot of knowledge and understanding and you put all that down in such incredible stories that sound so real...Thank You
You are a fabulous writer with a great imagination. I wonder at what point some Scientist will make your wrtitng real. Please write more.
I didn't like how Terry and Jen messed the guy up and caused him to become a woman that's wrong they should have told him right from the start
Was not a fan for 1 simple reason this story is about the ends justifying the means.
I was so excited to imagine myself as the main character. I enjoyed all the products and the resulting sexual changes and climaxes achieved at each change. I hope some will be inspired to actually produce such wonder drugs.
You are a brilliant writer.
It’s an amazing and engaging story!! I would love to have been able to be Nicki! It was a dream of mine.
I loved this story - couldn't even take a break until I got to the end. Great work.
Brilliant story. Loved it from start to finish. Any chance of getting hold of the products😁😁 Penny x
A very well written story. I can where it started but I'm glad you went with an accidental transition. I don't think it's the life Nick imagined, but he got a good life after all.