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HansTrimbleHansTrimbleover 13 years ago
It's over too soon

You had a lot of good stuff in this story, enough for a tale two or three times as long. I'd have enjoyed having it stretched out longer, prolonging the pleasure.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 10 years ago
Great beginning -

Like so many of your stories - it is nice, happy, loving, and fun -

But there is a full life to live - I want to read some of it LOL!!

oldgraycatoldgraycatover 2 years ago

Wonderful story however too short.

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