All Comments on 'Pickup'

Great story

Congrats, it’s a beautiful love story. Very well written, with attention to detail. It’s great that you’re taking all this time before going to sex. It makes it credible, like something that can really happen.

I wonder how will evolve now that love is knocking the door…

Definitely needs a part two. Outstanding literary effort!

love the building story. can't wait for the next chapter.

Love it. Waiting on part 2

Excellent.