All Comments on 'Picnic'

Fantastic!

You did not introduce the characters at the start except to say they all had kids and one had a job. I also assumed one was male with a dick and two were female with tits. Are they all friends or relatives? Maybe just all friends with benefits.

Inconsistencies.....Sarah is on her hands and knees yet she is touching herself and her husbands dick at the same time? and she is sucking her hubby as Hazel is helping her wank him off??