All Comments on 'Picture Day'

Can see why he divorced your cheating skanky ass. Fucking whore

Love the pic of your bum too - looks edible!

I know a photographer doing photo shoots of this type... Not the depth of this one but the sessions do get hot (according to her). Thanks for the story

Written by a slut for sluts.

Great story I hope to see more from you.

and pretty unrealistic. she did not even check if her husband was the author of the request. as for the rest, sex is so a non-value it seem to equal with a spit on the pavement. who cares with whom, where, why . I take a shit when I have to.

But i do the photos myself... Husband was crazy to jave a male model other than himself.

is that you don't have kids at least you won't make them sick.

Why women like this want to stay married. OK, maybe he's rich or provides a nice safe boring place to come home to after fucking the football team. Still, why marry in the first place?

Just wonderful and I love the back story! In fact I wish there was more of it to read! I hope you will write more and if you need another angle, then some more adventures from before the husband leaves would be a winner!

Cheers!

Just another formula slut/WACC story.

Absolutely nothing new

So even if it were 5*, which it is not, I would have too average over what 50, 100, 400 identical stories. That would mean less than 1*.

Needs editing. Lots of errors.

"Photography session for hubby", though a typical format, is very well done in this story. Adding the female photographer and her brother to the format adds a really erotic twist to it.

Pay no attention to the flamers. They read these stories so they can lay their own private guilt on the authors - otherwise why would they read them?

It makes the story impossible to read and get any enjoyment from it. And OMG! Get rid of the NASTY picture in your bio. That's just wrong. Worse if it's actually your ass.

A few errors, but the pacing and language made it less distracting than other stories I have read with errors. It was hot. Keep writing!

This would never happen. If it did i hope she got pregnant.

Deep in the darkest recesses of the lust driven mind, this is what we want and fear in equal measure. Forbidden fruit always tastes the sweetest. Great story, loved it.