All Comments on 'Picture Perfect'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story, better sex!

I love the detail in this story. It reads like a chapter in an erotic novel. I'll be looking for the next installment . thanks!

sparktamedsparktamedalmost 12 years ago

Another brilliant, sensual story from you. I enjoy reading you very much! Please, do keep entertaining us.

hotfunpen3hotfunpen3almost 12 years agoAuthor
Thats motivation!

Thank you for your compliments. Nothing is better motivation for more stories!

xxo Scott

Felicity99Felicity99over 11 years ago
Great writing

You write extremely well - please give us more stories. And more audios too - you use your voice very well. So erotic.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I would live to hear how you returned the favor.

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Writer and slightly evil guy from Canada who loves to tease, loves to excite and sometimes will play. I want feedback on my stories but I need inspiration even more. Can't wait for you to contribute ...