All Comments on 'Picture Perfect'

Maggie loved this story a lot and so did I , well written and very hot

Good, without the racist shit that normally comes with these stories. 5/5

Good story. Well written except for all of the commas. You use way too many.

Calling her bitch in the moment is a deal breaker for me. Everything was good and if the guy is OK with her commenting about Jacks huge cock I am ok. But I know had it been my wife she would not take to being called bitch.

I enjoyed it, but it was a bit spare in its writing. Needs more of something!