All Comments on 'Pictures from Life Ch. 01'

Spell check next time before you post.

not too bad for a first story but you need to smooth it out. The sentences are choppy and there are many spelling errors. The content is very good

I gave up. Pretty good story telling but distractingly bad grammar, word choice and spelling. Ask someone to edit your work.

Dr beulhthebrit; Sorry, it's a nice story, one I'd really like to enjoy, but I feel it's been written by one of my year 7 classes. Spelling mistakes, mum watches mum with the other girls etc. Please, please use the spell check, read through several times and check your grammar.

I don't care about spelling and grammar slips like the school marms who left their E.B. Strunkistic comments. However, I didn't need to see the author bio to know the story was composed by a fellow 'Bro.'