All Comments on 'Pierced Desperation'

and authors on LW. Then there is justincb.

Week after week, day after day relentlessly pedalling this junk. Yes yes we get it, you don't have anything else in your life and so you can regulary assembly a lot of words on a page. "story" would be too flattering for the result.

I'm sorry, not interesting, just crap.

Most of these cringing cowards just slam my writing under "Anonymous" That's okay. I have made quite a bit of coin elsewhere for my literary efforts in this genre. My favorite criticisms are when I'm told that the guy should beat up his wife for trying to dominate him, etc. Obviously no one understands that people who are turned on by this WANT the fantasy. Usually not the reality. But isn't that what writing is all about? "The Bridges of Madison County" provided a lot of satisfaction for vaguely dissatisfied women who wouldn't dream of actually leaving their husbands...fantasy is the bomb, right?