All Comments on 'Pierced Girl's Drunken Face-fuck'

It went by so fast that I didn't even have time to get going. Draw it out at least a little (it doesn't have to be a novel). As well, the subject of the story didn't fit the title.

Your style of writing is fine. Your ability to arouse is not fine. There's not one thing erotic about this episode you've described. If you can't do better than this, why bother?

I love women who are peirced. Many of my fantasies involve women who have their nipples pierced and wear rings and also have their cunts pierced, usually multiple times, and also wear rings.

I liked the part where you could take her by the rings in her cunt and spread her lips open. I also enjoyed the fact that you fucked her in the middle of the night after you had woken up, presumably to piss.

Too bad she didn't want to see you again. I think you could have shown her a thing or two about fucking.