All Comments on 'Pierced Pt. 01'

Looking forward to many chapters of this. Well written and a lot of good character development. There are many angles you can visit with this one.

Husband not keeping up his end of the deal in the marriage with his lack of sex drive - this is a one-way trip to disaster brewing here unless he accepts consequences of his inattention. Ken

This is my first submission to Literotica, and I appreciate the welcome! More chapters to come - always open to feedback!

-LB

Sexy, funny, both whimsical and down-to-earth, and with a teasing thread of fetishism running through. A really assured debut, with a likeable heroine and fresh erotic appeal. I look forward to more!

The story can go in any direction from here. Her newfound sexuality, as symbolized by the piercing I hope she's going to get, may be the spark the husband needs to get over a madonna-whore complex and start giving her the attention she deserves. They may explore swinging, bdsm, anything. Or she may cheat on him, have a divorce and start a new life. Or any one of a number of exciting prospects.

The death-and-gloom ”piercings will kill you" comments are just plain stupid; reflections of the commentors' prejudices and spiteful desires to put-down anything that doesn't appeal to them. Just ignore that garbage. This story is GOOD. Please continue the excellent work.

What a bitch.

i don't think this story is about pessimisme ,it describes a young mother with sexual fantasys loving her own body and exploring the things she can experience with it on her own ,in my experience girls have a vivid fantasy when it comes to masturbation ,it's well written and not over the hill like some writers here who wants us to believe a woman can orgasm about 30 times in an hour lol

keep up the writing, this story has more chapters to come and more plot to explore. does she have it done, does it change her life, how does she explain it to her husband, does it change him and does she have her cunt lip and nipples pierced? good luck, I'll watch out for you.