All Comments on 'Pillar of Salt'

loving/lovely. Adjectives and superlatives aside, the word 'pussy' seemed out of place in what is otherwise a mature and sincere celebration of love manifest through sexual congress. I found myself somersaulting through space as though I'd run into a chain in the dark . . . crashing back to earth . . . crushed by the secular when all else had been and would become sacred again. . . .At the very least: get a proof reader, better yet an editor . . . a peer--especially one not given to the sniggering use of street obscenities before the alter.

either one site or the other.

"Palin" rather than "Noel"?

A fine little tale, thank you.

i enjoyed it i love dad an daughter lust an sex.

To bring the heat. It was an okay short story but you never got the sexual heat to fire up. The delivery was a bit dry to work as a romantic love tale so the heat was needed all the more.