All Comments on 'Pincushion Pam'

Must be a man of high tolerance and infinite patience. What took him so long? I guess the sister kept him going?

I liked it, at the very least, Bill was not content to be a cuck. Good to see a man, married to a whore, get some of his own.

and then its AMF, good bye, C U L----GATOR....TK U MLJ LV NV

This was hilarious. Should have been in humor/satire.

I agree with @youngbrainoldbody: It took him too long to get rid of the whore...he wasn't free of guilt too: It took him 4 years fucking her sister to go ive with her? For that 3*

Nothing here to recap or vote on, just weird.

so over the top it should be in humor

Doesn't seem to have any redeemable characters in the story!

4

Three is the most I could do for this!

Quick romp - not bad for what it was...

Not much of a story. The sister should have helped him get the evidence, and gotten together with him after his divorce.

nothing from nothing leaves nothing, which is what she should've got. But once again the I'm fair guy strikes again.

"You're like a goddam sailor with a cock in every port."

LMAO, This is the statement of the year

Nothing interesting. Just a couple people fucking everyone.

Took him long enough but he got it

Decent story concept and very well written. Your awful use of dialogue quotes derails the excellent flow, especially putting your "putting every sentence" "in every paragraph" "in separate quotes". Literotica has an excellent tutorial on dialogue punctuation in its 'How To' category.

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You need to keep writing! It's been a long time since you posted. Us ol' boys out here in 'flyover land' have some good tales left in us, or so it would seem. Go for it! 5/5!!!

It was ok...at least 3 stars

Whoo hoo! You go Bill. 25 BIG FUCKING STARS!

Where’s the story? Dogshit! Not even worth half a star, but I’ll be generous and give you 1*

I've never heard the term "pincushion" before but at University I fucked a girl who had had "more pricks than a second hand dartboard."

I've never heard the term "pincushion" before but at University I fucked a girl who had had "more pricks than a second hand dartboard."

Nicely composed, Short, Succinct, Sweet, Hilarious & True-to-Life for many! Well-written, too! Top marks 5/5!