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by Mark5160

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
interesting series

I like the stories so far keep them coming.

Monmusu_WriterMonmusu_Writerover 5 years ago
Not bad

A literal pussy girl is a concept I've never seen before, and I've been on this site for years and seen some pretty weird stuff. I like the way you've portrayed hell and its demons. I'd be interested in seeing the other kinds that you mentioned, especially the amoeba girl.

There are some areas where you could improve your writing, though. You shouldn't have text in parentheses, generally speaking: either rewrite the text so it doesn't need parentheses, or just leave it out. Also, describing your character's exact height and weight isn't really necessary.

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

Very Fun und Funny!

11/10 Human Dildoes!!!!!

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Not much to say. Just a guy who wrote for a short while. I am not an expert by any mean but I try to get better. Also English is not my first language so sorry for the potential mistakes. Hope you'll like my stories.