by Mark5160
A literal pussy girl is a concept I've never seen before, and I've been on this site for years and seen some pretty weird stuff. I like the way you've portrayed hell and its demons. I'd be interested in seeing the other kinds that you mentioned, especially the amoeba girl.
There are some areas where you could improve your writing, though. You shouldn't have text in parentheses, generally speaking: either rewrite the text so it doesn't need parentheses, or just leave it out. Also, describing your character's exact height and weight isn't really necessary.