All Comments on 'Pipe Dreams Ch. 01'

can't wait to read more, keep up the excellent work.

Donna

Hope to see that next chapter soon. :)

CAUSE STOREY SEEMS LIKE IT GOING TO BE THE SHIT SO PLEASE DON'T KEEP US WAITING TOO LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER CAUSE THAT WOULD BE VERY UNKIND OF U

I do have a few unfinished stories but this is not one of them. It is currently in editing stage, but it is 'written' you might say, from beginning to end. I'll be posting it fairly regularly as I finish up the edits and comments from my beta and polish the story. Thank you for the comments, I hope you continue to enjoy Pipe Dreams.

It will offer great settings for the story as it develops.

The main characters seem to be off to good starts.

I'm looking forward to where the story goes.

interesting... a wonder what kind od beast this kane person is going to be?? and what lina's story is.

This is an interesting story.I like the plot thus far,good job

Can't wait to see where it goes:)

really great start :)

I'm looking forward to more.

I like this story very much. Looking forward to more.

more

Ch. 2 should post any day now. I submitted it several days ago. Thanks to everyone who took the time to read chapter 1, especially those who took the time to comment.

Again a gripping start onto the next chapter

i dont know it feels like no different from any other stories like there is no twist

to me it feels like you know whats going to happen next

The way you write... keeps me wanting more. Thank you.

-- Donnatah